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The Edge of Never (The Edge of Never, #1) - J.A. Redmerski image
I have had to DNF this at 77%
I may come back to it but right now the author is distracting me with unnecessary description of things nothing to do with the story.
Why, why did I read 3 pages of her buying toiletries? why!

and several pages describing them singing along to a song.
I don't like short books as I like really getting to know the characters but this is padded out it could be much much shorter and really push the story to the front, it goes against the grain but this needs to be shorter!