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Come Away With Me (With Me in Seattle, #1) - Kristen Proby The book was ok


but it was badly written, every sentence was a paragraph, you couldn't get a hang of the times either, they are sitting in the pub chatting then the next second they say 3 hours have past!!
oh a new chapter would start in the middle of a sex scene.
A few scenes felt as if they were taken from Twilight/ 50 shades... a private meadow, really?!?!
What could be an interesting scene/story is skimmed over, I think there was 2 pages only to the meeting of his sister, could have been a lot more interesting.
Oh and how many times do they have to repeat 'you are beautiful' or there was a 'tightening' in stomach, groin etc.