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Cut & Run (Cut & Run, #1) - Madeleine Urban,  Abigail Roux Ahhhh I wanted to give it more stars, I loved the guys, just the glaring mistakes bugged the hell out of me!
Eg......Zane blew the smoke away from the door... 5 sentences later on the same page 'he stuck the unlit cigarette behind his ear' and there are so many other glaring mistakes.... he popped 2 pills gave the 3rd in Ty's drink, a couple of pages later Ty apparently had all 3 pain killers!Lots of mistakes like that!
For 2 authors to this book these mistakes should not be there, it ruins a good story!I get grammar mistakes, but not mistakes in the story like that!
I want to read the other stories in the series but I just don't know if I can, it feels like Madeline U and Abigail R just rushed through and didn't care.... I shall think about it!